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Lau
Lau is on page 169 of 431
Im having such a hard time following the pacing of this book. Half of the time i dont know whos talking, they make crazy jumps from one scene to the next, or frm one point to a seemingly unrelated one, and some of the flowery wording is just confusing. I get we can make connections in subtext n between scenes but the set up is kinda lacking. I did laugh at the line about the socially appropriate number of knives tho
Jun 16, 2026 08:54PM
Long Live Evil (Time of Iron, #1)

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Lau
Lau is on page 69 of 431
Trying really hard to like this book but the het slop and clashing narrative voices is driving me up the wall. Please tell me it gets better
Jun 16, 2026 02:02PM
Long Live Evil (Time of Iron, #1)


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