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Marathon (shadow’s version)
Marathon (shadow’s version) is on page 470 of 529
girl i’m ready to get off this ride. at this point the book is way too long and way too ambitious. get a grip. just because something is a good idea doesn’t mean it’s a good plot. also if you are gonna derail the climactic fight because of the romance subplot YOU NEED TO DEVELOP THE ROMANCE SUBPLOT. SORRY BUT JUST DECLARING THEY LOVE EACH OTHER DOESNT COUNT AS DEVELOPMENT.
Jun 17, 2026 01:28PM
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Marathon (shadow’s version)
Marathon (shadow’s version) is on page 385 of 529
idk in addition to my documented notes on the romantic aspects of this book i feel we’ve lost the plot. why was a pivotal character only mentioned over halfway through before dropping out of the story again? await my review
Jun 11, 2026 04:00PM
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Marathon (shadow’s version)
Marathon (shadow’s version) is on page 313 of 529
this book insists on lying to me about what the main romance is… but i know better
May 31, 2026 05:31PM
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Marathon (shadow’s version)
Marathon (shadow’s version) is on page 102 of 529
need a sarmodel in my life but it’s already too late for me
May 08, 2026 07:51PM
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Marathon (shadow’s version)
Marathon (shadow’s version) is on page 62 of 529
1.) this book is remarkably rectangular. the corners even along the spine are noticeably sharp just upon picking up the book. book sharpness isn’t something you notice until you pick up a sharp book.
2.) has the painfully contemporary and conversational narration style of many modern books despite the setting. which is i suppose accounted for in the framing forward but still is distracting fr th historical setting
May 08, 2026 04:03PM
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