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Everyone keeps performing actions [VERB] WITH THE [NOUN] of a man/woman + [insert second Verb plus a second comparative phrase]
The performative sentence structure became ridiculous a huundred pages ago!
This is why people start suspecting it’s all AI, because every other sentence follows the exact same grammar pattern and it sounds inauthentic — red flag !
— Jun 17, 2026 03:16PM
The performative sentence structure became ridiculous a huundred pages ago!
This is why people start suspecting it’s all AI, because every other sentence follows the exact same grammar pattern and it sounds inauthentic — red flag !
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Lit Reader
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There is a whole section on which “Lord Matlock” is typed-in, but it should read “Lady Matlock” instead, because the situation describes a HER, and the context gives away that’s it’s meant to be Lady Matlock all along [ eye roll ]
— Jun 17, 2026 06:34PM
Lit Reader
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Darcy’s connection to Mrs. Gardiner has been explained in 7 different iterations, to different people or internal recaps… meanwhile, there’s Mr. Bingley suddenly installed for tea at the Bennet’s parlor with no explanation to his arrival, his reason for being in Hertfordshire, since when, why, what for ???
— Jun 17, 2026 01:43PM
Lit Reader
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Twice Elizabeth has arrived home after a sea-side stroll, to find the exact same scene described almost word for word, with very little adjustments — lazy and sloppy !
— Jun 16, 2026 08:59PM
Lit Reader
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The set up is convoluted ; Mrs. Gardiner is somehow related to the Fitzwilliams & the Darcys, OK — but then Elizabeth (who is said to spend months with the Gardiners in London every year) did not know of the connection with the Earl.
In the same vein, while Lizzy is supposed to be considered a consistent part of the family by the G children, she had not met Mrs. Gardiner’s mother who lives near-by ! HOW ??
— Jun 16, 2026 09:54AM
In the same vein, while Lizzy is supposed to be considered a consistent part of the family by the G children, she had not met Mrs. Gardiner’s mother who lives near-by ! HOW ??
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I am soldiering on [ ha! ], and all I am finding is that characters keep knowing things they should not, Jane’s inane character turned sinister, and the convoluted family tree keeps not making any sense…
This is the author's third book, and I DNF'd all three. I feel bad because I know this is a new author, and I want to support new authors, but each book was very easy to just quit reading (especially the one that was over 600 pages).