Naomi’s Reviews > Jealousy > Status Update

oh wow i wonder who the traitor is its totally not obvious or anything. Also i hate the arguments where its like "who hurt you!?" "I cant tell you... because... youll get mad and try to defend me..." LIKE REALLY BITCH?

also another pet peeve is when dru constantly calls the Djamphir "suckers". I get the same cringe feeling as when people unironically say "foids" or "chicks" its like... just SAY VAMPIRE

dumb chapter we literally just spent 5 pages shopping with dru and 2 vamps. i wrote a pointless shopping scene just like this in the crap story i wrote when i was 9. why are these immortal vampires blushing over dru getting midol? (period medication). why was she teasing them by asking for midol? and the whole 'im not like other girls i hate clothes shopping i want GUNS heheh..." girl... kys

ok i'm continuing the series because i have all the books anyway so i might as well otherwise they'll end up in a bin somewhere or forgotten on the library cancelled shelf for years to come so...