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Dawn
is on page 20 of 295
On page 3 they are making a big deal about Chloe’s pink hair. On page 16, she tells Rocco that “it’s not pink.” 🤨
Also the swapping between character points of view starting on page 10 is kind of aggravating.
— Jun 18, 2026 10:13PM
Also the swapping between character points of view starting on page 10 is kind of aggravating.
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Dawn
is on page 277 of 295
How many times does Chloe have to mention how easy it is to be cool and objective about other people’s problems?
— Jul 10, 2026 09:09AM
Dawn
is on page 271 of 295
She fell asleep for maybe an hour before Colin called. Not “half a night.”
— Jul 10, 2026 08:20AM
Dawn
is on page 260 of 295
So…Chloe took a long, hot shower, sat down to watch tv, and got to a bar in the time it took Rocco to start driving Amy home and turn around when they hadn’t even gotten to her parent’s house?!?
— Jul 10, 2026 08:05AM
Dawn
is on page 236 of 295
“That little white lie again, but he’s been praying a lot.” What does one have to do with the other?
— Jul 09, 2026 07:35PM
Dawn
is on page 210 of 295
2 small bags of chips with 3 in each = 6 chips to wash down with a Coke, not 3. And where did the ice cream bar come in?
— Jul 09, 2026 09:01AM
Dawn
is on page 207 of 295
How does Amy know Chloe and where she lives/works? This book is really irritating. Seems amateurishly written.
— Jul 09, 2026 08:45AM
Dawn
is on page 142 of 295
Chloe’s aunt Grace doesn’t even know who Rocco is…so why does she act like she does when they are discussing Amy?
— Jul 03, 2026 09:26PM
Dawn
is on page 120 of 295
“They stood in the shadowed interior…”. Yet Rocco is still carrying Chloe. On the very next page, he “gently lowered her onto the workbench.”
— Jul 02, 2026 08:49PM