Eilidh Mackay’s Reviews > Shallow River > Status Update

“Im going to find River. Alive. And then I’m going to take her home and give her the life she deserves.” An unnamed emotion glittering in her dead eyes. “Thank you.”-pg381 maybe barbie does care?
My girl comes barreling through, her eyes wide with panic. “River!” “Mako! Watch out!” The last thing I see is the barrel of a gun being pointed directly at my head.-pg387 please do not hurt mako!!😩

I gag when I feel flesh on flesh. “You’re my father, and you’re going to rape me?!” I scream, outraged and disturbed by his lack of morals. “You always were a daddy’s girl.”-pg369 makes my skin crawl
Sure, dad, you can watch me shower. That’s not fucking repulsive or anything. “Let’s go then, Daughter.”-pg375 he is such a creep, I had the fact they keep referencing they are father and daughter

The final nail in the coffin is the small bloody handprint on the window, the size of Rivers hands. My girl didn’t leave without a fucking fight, that’s for sure. I know how it ends, but yet I’m waiting for her to escape him anyways. “But this right here, is why she didn’t tell you. I hope you can forgive her.” “I already have,” I whisper.-pg359 time for Mako and Amelia to become a team

My instincts are blaring red right now and I can’t see why just yet. I freeze when his face comes into view. I knew he would come for me. “You betrayed me River. Your own father.” A gasp lodges in my throat. “You look so much like how Barbie did when she was your age. Beautiful. But those eyes, they’re exactly like my mother’s. I hated my mother.”-pg348 what is Billy going to do? Where the hell is Mako?

“He’s coming up behind me, gun in his hand already raised to my head. Then he just stops cold when I lift River up, and he hears the first cries from a little baby. River is what ultimately saved my life that day. As soon as Billy heard her cry, he decided he liked the sound of it. And then made it his life’s mission to hear her cry until the day she escaped Shallow Hill.”-pg336 fucking ominous…

River McAllister’s lips feel like fucking heaven on earth. “Tell me what you want with your words,” “I… I need you.” I’m seconds from losing it as I impale her directly onto my cock. “I like the way you hurt me,” Something primal erupts in my chest. “I’ve waited my whole life for someone like you. Now that I found it, I’m fucking terrified of losing it.”-ch22 he is so gentle, fuck it is hot

“You also didn’t realize it was me that danced with you later that night.” A satisfied smirk crooks the corners of his lips. The fact Mako is the one who I should’ve been with all along. The fact I was so close to having him is almost devastating. “That was what made me fall in love with you, River.” Hot tears burn my eyes. “Come here Mako”-pg317 UGH FINALLY🫠❤️ River grab your man. DEVOUR HIM!

I glance down to see his bloody, shredded knuckles. Mako covered in blood is a delicious sight. I grab his limp dick and begin sawing it off with the box cutter. Then, without further hesitance, I shove the broomstick up Ryan’s ass. Even the duck tape can’t contain Ryan’s screams. It takes a minute for Ryan to pass out from the pain. Another four before he bleeds out and dies.-pg300 gory final minutes🫣 eugh

“Alison and I had sex,” she blurts. “Are you blushing?” she teases. “No. Fuck. Yes. What the fuck? Did you really?” Actively trying to keep my dick from getting rock hard.-pg282
“I’m torturing him,” she confesses softly. His pointer finger is definitely broken. I smile when I realise it’s the same finger Ryan broke on River’s hand. That’s my girl-pg284 they better make Ryan so jealous!!😏

I snap my fingers at him, shooting him the gun signal with a smile. “I fucked your exgirlfriend.”-pg269 random twist
“Daddy dearest.” “That vile piece of shit was sucking my dick at eight years old. I was the weak little boy that got fucked every night.” “Are you sorry for how you treated me?” “I enjoyed every single second of it. I will never be sorry.”-pg271 he makes my skin crawl regardless