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not loving this so far, i mean we already talk about intimates less than 20 pages in which is crazy but alright!
also the writing feels a bit... confusing... like i'm either not getting a clear picture painted at all, or the scene's very much telling-not-showing. so idk what to make of it now. hoping the story draws me in.
— Jun 20, 2026 08:09PM
not loving this so far, i mean we already talk about intimates less than 20 pages in which is crazy but alright!
also the writing feels a bit... confusing... like i'm either not getting a clear picture painted at all, or the scene's very much telling-not-showing. so idk what to make of it now. hoping the story draws me in.
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