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There's also a lot happening "off-screen" which are simply narrates by the protag's pov. But they feel important to have been actively written about.
— Jun 21, 2026 05:17AM
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I'm struggling to make sense of a few things - details are explained in an odd order that makes it difficult to remember.
— Jun 21, 2026 10:20AM
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A doctor is an academic but she's not really written as such. It's not believable.
— Jun 21, 2026 10:11AM
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I'm not feeling very connected to the establishment of these crushes. It feels very written for the sake of it - hopefully it becomes more meaningful later on. Even when romance is central to the book, I still feel like it needs to be well established in the stour instead of just placed in there because that's what the author wanted.
— Jun 21, 2026 05:14AM
