Bethany’s Reviews > Set Fire to the Gods > Status Update

Oh. My. God. I do not need Madoc's internal dialogue and description shoved inbetween every line of dialogue. Especially when Madoc's thoughts add nothing and the more the scenery is described the less I know what it looks like. Holy shit how did this get published.

"Voice like gravel shaking in a jar???????" What the fuck does that even mean??? I can't dnf two books in a row I can't dnf two books in a row I can't dnf two books in a row. But I want to.

Ignitus was just spelled "Ignatus." This is not the first typo lol I understand a word or two BUT A MAJOR CHATACTER'S NAME? WAS THIS PROOF READ