maya’s Reviews > The Song of Salt and Shadow > Status Update
maya
is 71% done
“it all comes crashing in on me again, the ugly truth we call reality, like a wave crashing into cliffsides.” this book needs an editor. there’s so many of these repetitive sentences
— Jun 23, 2026 03:16PM
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maya
is 72% done
having the girl who can’t read look at books for their salvation is frying me so bad like why is she even doing this. it makes the plot kinda inconsistent like why is she able to figure out this thing that no one else has when she can’t even read? why is she even unable to read in the first place?
— Jun 23, 2026 03:20PM
maya
is 27% done
sometimes i fear that some people have never experienced the ocean before because why is she drowning and sinking so fast? what happened to her being a strong swimmer?
— Jun 23, 2026 09:47AM
maya
is 23% done
intermaria has been lowercase this whole time and now it’s a proper noun….
— Jun 22, 2026 11:41AM
maya
is 20% done
there’s a lot of anachronistic language in the book and it makes it read very juvenile. “my heart almost fell out of my ass” “i crashed out on the bed”
— Jun 22, 2026 11:31AM
maya
is 20% done
is anyone going to explain this memory thing or did i miss something like ???????
— Jun 22, 2026 11:22AM
maya
is 18% done
eryse is already irritating like girl you stowed away on a pirate ship and now you’re upset they aren’t treating you well?? hello??? for someone who apparently had to live by her wits her whole life, she doesn’t have many of them
— Jun 22, 2026 11:13AM

