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"Look, there's something...off-putting about her....I can't really describe it. It's just when I'm near her...I can't wait to get away. It's a relief when she's not around."

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH

Ah, so you're going to be dumber for the sake of suspense aren't you

I'm scared of facing him again so I let him get away. I mean he's not going to suddenly stop chasing after you.

Oh you know she just got magical knowing powers. Also, her whole approach of I guess I'll just sit back and take it when it comes to being kissed against her consent it all kinds of gross.

You had one job Kelsey, but you couldn't even manage something simple as shutting up.

"I don't think they have anything to do with the American slave song 'Follow the Drinkin' Gourd.' I cant see how that could apply. It refers to the stars, the Big Dipper specifically, which guided American slaves to freedom..."

Once again, it's see I found this random fact that doesn't fit in my story but I'm going to shoehorn it in because I want to share factoids I looked up.

You have lightning powers but sure curl up into fetal position and whimper because bear.

Just because you researched a thing does not mean you needed to include that information in the story. We didn't need Kadam to tell us about the different classifications of water salinity.

Nah girl, you picked up that man with a lightning bolt and slammed him into a tree. That mother fucker dead.

What are you sponsored by Tillamook or something?