Summerfire’s Reviews > Old Country > Status Update

The writing on this is pretty juvenile. Sometimes it feels like they sat down with a thesaurus and like ok every few pages change out a common word but do in the middle of an otherwise colloquial sentence

The writing on this is so extraordinarily mid. Like...high school level of writing. You started out writing shitty middle school fanfic but have moved on to slightly better written creepypasta.