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evelyn
is 15% done
Yay cool magic system!! I got adjusted to the world and its characters pretty quickly and I’m excited to see how the plot unfolds so far it’s reading almost like a tv show but that’s mostly cuz short chapters and an unsolicited sex scene LOL rlly wasn’t expecting that but yay off to a good start
— Jun 24, 2026 10:58PM
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evelyn
is 72% done
Wow hey I’m still bored LOL idk everything feels so flat I’m still not attached to any of the characters nor do I rlly care where the plot goes even the death of one of the main characters made me gasp but it was so incredibly anticlimactic that none of the other characters’ grief feels that deep other like hello I’m an empath I should be feeling smth
— Jun 26, 2026 03:49PM
evelyn
is 47% done
Tbh I’m getting mad bored it’s all just gang politics and “I will die for our gang and family” bs like can smth freaking happen like yes we’ve been leading up to an obvi gang war but like ughhh im bored! And i wish the magic system was idk more whimsical? It’s lowkey TOO realistic to how magic would be treated irl lol and i love magical realism but the whimsy kind not this political stuff
— Jun 25, 2026 10:49PM