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Jo is 17% done
I’m already tired of hearing how small she is and the word “hotshot”. There is no chemistry between the characters but they act like there is, which is especially odd considering they don’t know each other.
Which is probably why it feels like reading fan fiction. It’s boring and flat. We’re breezing through flat scenes and the world feels incredibly small.
Jun 27, 2026 11:07AM
Unsteady (The Undone, #1)

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