Marla’s Reviews > The Factory > Status Update
Marla
is 50% done
It's okay so far, my only real gripe is with the formatting, and I feel like that's the translator's fault - all the text is together, as in no line breaks between dialogue and very few paragraph breaks. It doesn't seem intentional in this book, I know it sometimes is. And not having chapters labeled with the name of the person narrating them is a bit strange. All three POVs sound like the same person.
— 12 hours, 44 min ago
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