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putting this on pause for a bit - been in a bad reading slump i gotta find something else to read
— Jul 02, 2026 06:12PM
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i'm being so fucking slow with this one despite enjoying it because i'm balls deep in warhammer right now........... aah...
— Jun 27, 2026 04:03AM



the story frames it as a bittersweet thing of losing humanity and connection but i can't help but think being integrated into a ship as an AI sounds blissful as fuck.
i am my art: 3.5/5
that's another interesting take on mechs, short story but gets the point across.
and prison on my back: 2/5
something about the tone of this story just rubs me the wrong way. that's before mentioning the fact that they committed the 'dating your fiction' sin of directly referencing elon musk to be this figurehead on mars society enough to have people curse in his name. fuck you honestly.