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I'm sorry I can't I just can't. Sasha and Lyla are great characters but there's just sooo much filler. This was in dire need of a structural edit and it looks like it never saw one. If there's an mmc there's been no sign at this point and I'm done wading through endless conversations to get to him. Even fantastic banter can't save this one.
18 hours, 44 min ago
Between (The Chronicles of Between, #1)

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