Claire B **paused for now**’s Reviews > Berzerker > Status Update
Claire B **paused for now**
is 7% done
The correct form is past. Not passed. This error has cropped up a couple of times already. As in get past his insecurities. Not get passed his insecurities. He's not giving his insecurities to you. You are trying to circumvent them. I've got my mental red pen out... *sigh*
— Apr 21, 2017 03:49PM
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Claire B **paused for now**’s Previous Updates
Claire B **paused for now**
is 12% done
DNF'd at 12%. Dialogue was just too confusing and I didn't feel inclined to try to work who was saying what.
— Apr 21, 2017 05:57PM
Claire B **paused for now**
is 9% done
I keep losing track of who is speaking. The dialogue is really confusing in places.
— Apr 21, 2017 04:31PM
