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Emily Wayson
is starting
Trying not to give up
Starts strong till the MMC shows up then the writing tanks
The way he describes the FMC gives the ick
Maybe it gets better? Maybe the story is good? But the writing is very immature and undeveloped
— Jun 30, 2026 09:30AM
Starts strong till the MMC shows up then the writing tanks
The way he describes the FMC gives the ick
Maybe it gets better? Maybe the story is good? But the writing is very immature and undeveloped
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