Jayms Yon’s Reviews > Quarter Labyrinth > Status Update

Honestly I’m struggling so far with the writing style. It feels like she is trying to write with an old English style half the time, but not all the time… it just feels a bit clunky- not as smooth as I wish.

Also am lacking a lot of depth with the setting. I feel like I’m picturing the characters in a a blank space. There’s a lot missing