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i also think that the actual plot of the book that they were fake dating got really lost at some point and was a bit of a wasted potential. i think it would’ve been a lot more interesting if they went to the wedding together instead of the complication relying on petra and peter breaking up. would’ve shown a lot more character imo

i’m actually so pissed at miles. he did the one thing the entire book she was saying she was scared of and then tried to make it up to her in a surprise which she hates AND THEN said i love you in an attempt to get her back? not a fan. i’m not sure how im gonna get back on track with this relationship. also the whole dad trope was kinda random?

their chemistry is faltering a little bit; i was so surprised when something happened between them really shortly after my first update (around 30%). the characters are great, but obviously their background stories are a bit cliche and kinda unnecessary to explain them not being together: would’ve been easier to say they are confused with the fake dating thing. i also hate julia so much… she’s so entitled!!