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is 76% done
I’ve never forced myself to finish a book the way I have with this. The dialogue between characters is so unrealistic and cringey. What detective calls a victim “good girl”? WHAT is that awful dialogue between Taylor and Baldwin? It’s forced and unnatural making this 10x harder to get through.
— 1 hour, 6 min ago

