Elyssa Martinez’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update

I honestly do not think I'll finish this. I painfully read the fanfic, Manacles, and screamed over and over how much this needed an editor. Now that this had an editor, I was hopefully they provided direction and cutout the repetitive content that barely moved the story forward. Nope.Clever shift from magic to alchemists but so far not enough context to the history these characters are supposed to have.