Eilonwy’s Reviews > A Murder Most Camp > Status Update
Eilonwy
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This is moving quickly, and has depth I was not expecting. The moments of Mikey missing his mother are really getting to me. And the way he keeps a figurative arm extended to maintain distance from any authentic relationships feels believable. The mystery clues are a bit contrived, but I'm enjoying this enough not to feel critical about that.
— Jul 05, 2026 05:50PM
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Eilonwy
is on page 125 of 350
I almost chucked this at the beginning because the third person-present tense writing style felt really clunky, but now I'm used to it and the story is turning into an enjoyable mix of tense and silly.
— Jul 04, 2026 10:13AM
