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What in the Wattpad hell is this?
I keep picking up first-person romances, and somehow end up with poorly written bully nonsense and the emotional depth of a puddle.
And can we talk about the sentence structure?
I looked.I sighed.I breathed.
I blinked.I wondered.
Girl...I noticed.
I'm finishing this out of pure spite at this point, so expect more complaints to come.
Pray for me.
— Jul 06, 2026 08:52AM
I keep picking up first-person romances, and somehow end up with poorly written bully nonsense and the emotional depth of a puddle.
And can we talk about the sentence structure?
I looked.I sighed.I breathed.
I blinked.I wondered.
Girl...I noticed.
I'm finishing this out of pure spite at this point, so expect more complaints to come.
Pray for me.
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