CrowCaller’s Reviews > Apparently, Sir Cameron Needs to Die > Status Update
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better, the issues I have with prose continue. I'm not so sure about the "part 2", it feels like the pacing up until now was solid with hints of what was coming sprinkled in. Then here's a very long chapter with quite a lot of new stuff.
— Jul 06, 2026 10:06AM
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CrowCaller
is on page 106 of 384
I like a lot of the concepts and structure and dynamic here but the writing and prose and general execution? I keep editing it in my head, it just feels like it is a step off from what it could be.
— Jul 05, 2026 01:48PM
