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Tess
is 27% done
Hmm i'm not really sure I like that it skims every sex scene and is in the middle of a month long jump. Hard to connect with either main character that way
— Apr 25, 2017 05:13AM
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Tess
is 37% done
Hmm see now Donato is seeming bipolar because he's suddenly affectionate and begging for forgiveness. We haven't had the chance to connect with his psyche because of the POV and time jumps.
— Apr 25, 2017 05:32AM
