A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton’s Reviews > Fold Catastrophes > Status Update
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 16% done
Story 2 - appears to be a letter to someone the narrator cares for but that wasn’t introduced at the beginning to the reader and appears in randomly interspersed segments, also same writing style as previous
— Jul 07, 2026 11:03AM
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A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 71% done
Critical Mass was fun. They’re all blurring together at this point but the glaring issues are the same throughout.
— Jul 14, 2026 04:30PM
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 25% done
Story 3 I think, alien snatching
Another weird start but I felt like I understood what was happening and simultaneously connected with the character over the medical community being unhelpful and gas lighting.
— Jul 09, 2026 08:52PM
Another weird start but I felt like I understood what was happening and simultaneously connected with the character over the medical community being unhelpful and gas lighting.
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 8% done
Story 1 - would like more sensory information, the writing is very visually descriptive, action oriented, and dialogue driven
“Author’s Note” should be labeled
— Jul 07, 2026 09:25AM
“Author’s Note” should be labeled

