Kellie’s Reviews > Crowntide > Status Update

..we're not seeing any villagers or citizens and their perspectives. You keep shouting "im a villian" but it's the most hollow thing.... who thinks you're a villian, no one that i can see.... also absolving you're self of guilt by looking into a pool of possibilities is BS. "Its inevitable" "we'll there were worse choices" no boo, you still need to take some accountability....

She seriously did 2 dinners, two hallway scenes back to back within a paragraph.... terrible pacing. And again, if a character wasn't on screen they ceased to exist. Oro disappeared again! Just days of no word, just assume he's fighting the rift.... where were the wildings in Nightshade, any starling except Cinder? What are they up to, do they even exist anymore? That's why the "but im a villian" keeps falling flat..

Decent cliff hanger. I think I've identified my problem with the author. It feels like she's writing a CW TV script. I've never seen Vampire Diaries, but I assume it's similar to this. Different chapters could be episodes. Lots of "action" but little plot if that makes sense. 3 weeks?! Crazy. Especially when she says it's been weeks, but there was still 10 days left. Like the author literally can't read a calendar...

Decent cliff hanger. I think I've identified my problem with the author. It feels like she's writing a CW TV script. I've never seen Vampire Diaries, but I assume it's similar to this. Different chapters could be episodes. Lots of "action" but little plot if that makes sense. 3 weeks?! Crazy. Especially when she says it's been weeks, but there was still 10 days left. Like the author literally can't read a calendar...

Now this is gut wrenching betrayal😭😭

Oh look, the blade to kill Lark, found it😒 also a side quest at 94% is crazy. I thought this series was only 4 books?? Is it 5?!?!! Please don't be, I need this to end😭

She killed Jessel to save her soul for later, yeah yeah yeah. But if she doesn't have access to her powers, then how is she going to store the soul??

There are representatives from all across the galaxy.... they're all men with pretty standard features, they are all human with human hands and bones.... I've seen too much Dr Who and Star Wars to believe that in conquering different worlds and galaxies are only populated with human like civilizations......

It's giving Avengers endgame, with Doctor Strange running through the infinite possibilities and Thanos trying to control the universe.....

Oh the parallels😒 now , she gets to help him regain his memories and build their love from the ground up all over again..... not gonna lie though, I did always kind of want it to be Grim. So looks like things are working out for me at least.... not so much for Orro....