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Jo
is 62% done
See this is the problem. If you write a characters who’s supposed to be the smartest, she can’t make stupid mistakes.
She killed that one woman’s step dad for being a pedophile and then only takes her polaroid???? I need a new word for dumb because that doesn’t cut it anymore. That’s a connection you stupid cow.
— Jul 09, 2026 11:13AM
She killed that one woman’s step dad for being a pedophile and then only takes her polaroid???? I need a new word for dumb because that doesn’t cut it anymore. That’s a connection you stupid cow.
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Jo
is 26% done
Great. Another sex joke mid-dialogue. How fucking tacky. It’s so so so cheap. I’m so over this.
— Jul 09, 2026 10:43AM
Jo
is 25% done
In book 1 the FBI was glad the media hasn’t gotten wind of Lana’s murders yet.
Now (book2) they’re suddenly like “yeah let’s deliver the profile to the media” without explanation.
Why the sudden switch? You haven’t even fully finished the profile.
— Jul 09, 2026 10:40AM
Now (book2) they’re suddenly like “yeah let’s deliver the profile to the media” without explanation.
Why the sudden switch? You haven’t even fully finished the profile.
Jo
is 21% done
Great! Other women drama! And not just one but two jealous women! Amazing! Love that! It’s just so cool when the only rational, normal, cool female character is the main character!
— Jul 09, 2026 10:32AM