Kaylyn’s Reviews > Not Quite Dead Yet > Status Update

I’m not sure if the narrating is what I dislike or if it’s the writing of certain characters. I also understand a bit more her motivation to solve the case but I really wish that part of the story was a bit stronger
I do like the little moments between Jet and Billy they’re sweet!

I think i would like this a bit more if the main character was like a cop or something. I get that she wants to complete something before she dies but she has no experience with an investigation and that keeps nagging at me
i also do not believe she is 27 years old.