Mel (Epic Reading)’s Reviews > The Everlasting > Status Update

Thank goodness this is improving… but there’s still just a lack of something overall. Maybe it’s the second person perspective?

This just reads so slow… I don’t know why as half of it is repetition of what we already know. Maybe that is why because I’m a bit bored?

Ah Alix. Always glazing over the obvious and letting the reader infer. :)