Chanel’s Reviews > Red Zone Realizations > Status Update

This writing is… not good. It feels like the author thinks her readers are idiots and everything is being explained. It’s giving Wattpad writing from when I was like 12. “I got out the car. I grabbed my keys, water bottle, and purse. I walked to the front of the house and opened the door.” (That isn’t a paragraph from the book). Just paragraphs of that kind of writing. I’m dying here!!!