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In my head, the way when I first heard of Sohrab and Rustom, it reminds me of Odepius story. It’s this story type within dramas of old. It’s in other epics too. I The framing of this conflict, tragedy of the way the situation is inevitable, is so enticing to me. I am sure there are multiple iterations of similar setups. Ganesh and Shiva or Krishna and his Uncle. Athena and Zeus.
— Jul 12, 2026 01:35PM
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Deepa
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If you enjoyed Vaishnavi Patel, Burn the Sea, or Graceling, this will interest equally. IT’s got a great comps. This is a promising story and scale.
— Jul 13, 2026 06:06PM
Deepa
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There is a q of did Rustom love Tahmineh? Separated loves. hell does she feel real feelings. does she experience later on. It’s all within that structure. It’s fun to go in and feel and experience that type of story and emphasis.
My only neg is I think first person holds back the adult tone but tones of adult books are also written in 1st too.
— Jul 13, 2026 06:01PM
My only neg is I think first person holds back the adult tone but tones of adult books are also written in 1st too.
Deepa
is 60% done
This story is built on miscommunication, pride, secrecy, and fate. Fate works toward justice but not for individuals. — genre of it.
“She did not want to be saved by a witch.”
Sohrab is so young in this . Foolhardy zeal. He wants so much to be recognized by his father, to be worthy, and lifetime of no communication drives him to act so rashly.
— Jul 13, 2026 05:54PM
“She did not want to be saved by a witch.”
Sohrab is so young in this . Foolhardy zeal. He wants so much to be recognized by his father, to be worthy, and lifetime of no communication drives him to act so rashly.
Deepa
is 56% done
in myths and epics, your lineage is connection. Tahmineh is daeva blessed daughter and Rustom is someone with his own blessings but based on gender, based their kingdoms, she’s a witch and he’s a hero. Sohrab’s blood is strong and powerful. The character wants to be comparable to his father.This kid especially wants his father’s attention. weight you give to their actions.
— Jul 13, 2026 05:45PM
Deepa
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I’m so new Shahnameh. I can only see from the povs I have. I really liked this. I think if you treat it how you treat similar traditions. idk if I spoke about archetypes, structure and lines. There’s something about woman going against fate itself for her son. larger than any hero. the drama is in the inevitable. depths and echoes.
— Jul 13, 2026 05:38PM
Deepa
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She talks about being regent. a woman descending from warrior kings. “A woman with magic brimming in her veins.” She talks about how there are days they wish to erase the power she once held. That’s alright because she there are days she wishes to be forgotten too. Then she relives it all again. And wonders how much or little she existed as well.
— Jul 13, 2026 05:32PM
Deepa
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My first thought when I read the prologue was I wish it was an epilogue. I went back and read the prologue to understand the ending more fully.
at first, I read it as a provocation but not really. it gives you hint about Tahmneh’s unrest. Stories are divided some blame her. Some fate. Some god. Some a mixture of both. They call her a “temptress. conniver. lover, liar.” She calls herself a witch.
— Jul 13, 2026 05:27PM
at first, I read it as a provocation but not really. it gives you hint about Tahmneh’s unrest. Stories are divided some blame her. Some fate. Some god. Some a mixture of both. They call her a “temptress. conniver. lover, liar.” She calls herself a witch.
Deepa
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Immensely readable. If you liked Circe, Kaikeyi, or Daughter of the Moon Goddess, I feel like this will interest you. Sohrab is teenager when this occurs. A wonderful addition to Bhathena’s works, this is was an excellent as her first adult novel.
— Jul 12, 2026 05:43PM
Deepa
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zende razm observation - a good spot.
I’m at the point where the I feel the story starting take shape. I’m really intrigued. Circe vibes so far.
— Jul 12, 2026 02:36PM
I’m at the point where the I feel the story starting take shape. I’m really intrigued. Circe vibes so far.
Deepa
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The court hates her and her safety is precarious should something happen to her father.
her mom is fish spirit. They communicate in that way. As a device, I really like. We’re not treating this like fantasy. This myth based on current religion and their stories.
girl listen to your mother. this seems like a bad idea.
— Jul 12, 2026 01:38PM
her mom is fish spirit. They communicate in that way. As a device, I really like. We’re not treating this like fantasy. This myth based on current religion and their stories.
girl listen to your mother. this seems like a bad idea.

