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At this point, I just want to get to the end.

the length, grammar, punctuation and extra or missing words indicate this book could use editing. you can set up a pattern by using 2 or 3 events and situation...cut the rest out and shorten the word count. tighten it up. good story though.

don't get me wrong but this story is waaaay too long. I like the story and characters but a normal books would be done. No reason for this book to be triple a regular books length.

Aiden and Paulie flipping out and horrified that little Delilah is growing up! so realistic! We'be got to do something, there are boys out there. LOL love it.

He names his guitar Dee-Lee after sister Dee-Dee but he keeps calling the guitar Dee-Dee? Good book just needs editor for little mistakes.