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Casse NaRome
is 11% done
Aiden and Paulie flipping out and horrified that little Delilah is growing up! so realistic! We'be got to do something, there are boys out there. LOL love it.
— Nov 21, 2012 01:56AM
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Casse NaRome
is 69% done
the length, grammar, punctuation and extra or missing words indicate this book could use editing. you can set up a pattern by using 2 or 3 events and situation...cut the rest out and shorten the word count. tighten it up. good story though.
— Nov 22, 2012 08:42PM
Casse NaRome
is 44% done
don't get me wrong but this story is waaaay too long. I like the story and characters but a normal books would be done. No reason for this book to be triple a regular books length.
— Nov 22, 2012 03:13AM
Casse NaRome
is 8% done
He names his guitar Dee-Lee after sister Dee-Dee but he keeps calling the guitar Dee-Dee? Good book just needs editor for little mistakes.
— Nov 21, 2012 01:12AM
