Ashley’s Reviews > Coven of the Black Rose > Status Update

I continue to be baffled by the spacing in this book. It’s bizarre and keeps making me think different lines are said by the wrong character.
For instance, let’s say it’s a conversation between Billy and Joe.
The page looks like this:
Joe stared ahead. “Should we go running?” Billy wiped his brow.
“I can’t run when it’s sunny.” Joe shook his head.
“I know, Billy. I like rain”

The writing is so choppy it’s distracting. This was my Michael Jackson themed mistakes day. The word blanket was capitalized randomly mid sentence and someone asked “what’s he matter” instead of “the matter,” making me think of the famous “hehe” MJ was known for.
If I continue, I might as well make it a fun hunt for errors.

There’s pressure as the only person on Goodreads to have read this, or attempted, but I’ll be honest for when the second person reviews in twenty more years.
And honestly… might DNF.