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I’m really drawn to the premise of this. I’m just wondering if we need this much exposition. Maybe this would’ve been a better short story?

Okay. I know 2% of the way done is not enough to judge, but here I go. I already feel like this isn’t the least bit subtle. I’m struggling with what the tone of this should be. Is it satire? Is it too self-aware? Too “of the time”? I don’t know, man. I’m finishing it after paying the ridiculous price on Kindle, but I’m not stoked.