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Midniteillusion
is on page 410 of 480
He's been fighting with her for what? 100 pgs to get her to say she loves him then 10 pgs later he says he doesn't believe her. Very much the "if it's not my way on my terms it's wrong" mentally, this is what I'm talking about with the emotional abuse I see from him. He's not abusive in the same way her father and husband were/are busy still hurts and manipulates her to get what he wants.
— Apr 30, 2017 12:28PM
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Midniteillusion
is on page 473 of 480
I enjoyed the ending though wouldn't have minded little longer of an epilogue and a bit more reflection from Sion before he headed out after her.
— Apr 30, 2017 06:01PM
Midniteillusion
is on page 405 of 480
I liked Mrs. T in the first part of the book but I'm not sure why Danny continually refers to her as her friend when she's not actually very nice to her and continually talks down to her. I've liked her less and less as the book does on, and you're suppose to like the spunky housekeepers.
— Apr 30, 2017 12:20PM
Midniteillusion
is on page 404 of 480
Then parts of this book are so good. I feel like the plot idea is/was amazing. It should have been told in 2 parts though. And a few scenes needed to be cut out and more research done on how someone physically and mentally abused for 20 years would actually behave and how their part should act would have been better.
Perhaps a better editor is what this book was missing.
— Apr 30, 2017 12:04PM
Perhaps a better editor is what this book was missing.
Midniteillusion
is on page 389 of 480
He's describing himself of how he was when he and Tory fell in love, it doesn't really match up with how it seemed earlier in the book, but it describes how he is now.
— Apr 30, 2017 11:45AM
Midniteillusion
is on page 378 of 480
He really is a dunce sometime, and selfish/self-centered(?).
How will they ever be married and reveal the truth of who she is if they go out to a society ball now with her as the contessa???
— Apr 30, 2017 11:26AM
How will they ever be married and reveal the truth of who she is if they go out to a society ball now with her as the contessa???
Midniteillusion
is on page 373 of 480
This paragraph makes no sense. Why even ask what to tell Sion about Camden catching her with Timothy? Then saying to keep it a secret??? She should already know he'll find out especially when you bring the nanny home as your new house guest. How is this going to stay a secret??? Just another bit that should have been cut from the book.
— Apr 30, 2017 11:19AM
Midniteillusion
is on page 323 of 480
"He had the urge to do violence" why did he get so violent and abusive in this half of the book???
It's not like he doesn't know her past and her insecurities, he just notes them on the previous page. Snapping at her age threatening violence will only reinforce them because of her past.
— Apr 30, 2017 01:03AM
It's not like he doesn't know her past and her insecurities, he just notes them on the previous page. Snapping at her age threatening violence will only reinforce them because of her past.
Midniteillusion
is on page 313 of 480
--She could have easily gone on an outing to see his grandmother just like she does to go shopping and it would have given the same results.
— Apr 30, 2017 12:47AM
Midniteillusion
is on page 312 of 480
I feel like that whole thing with him thinking she was going for a drive with her husband and locking her in her room then her tricking him so she could get out then her coming home and having everyone hate her then him abuse her physically/mentally/emotionally was all unnecessary. --
— Apr 30, 2017 12:47AM
Midniteillusion
is on page 308 of 480
And did he call Tory all of these names? Bitch/witch in bed she whatever?
Why can't he let her express anything? He tells her how she feels. Gets mad when she cries of clams up when that's all she's known for 20+ years. This author really needed to do some mental health research.
— Apr 30, 2017 12:39AM
Why can't he let her express anything? He tells her how she feels. Gets mad when she cries of clams up when that's all she's known for 20+ years. This author really needed to do some mental health research.
