Jay’s Reviews > Sky Full of Elephants > Status Update
Jay
is 22% done
I’m curious to see if this story is going to treat the characters as multi-dimensional people or figures in an allegory. It’s kind of toeing the line right now.
— Jul 16, 2026 04:35PM
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Jay
is 48% done
I don’t know how much longer I can stick with this book. It can’t decide if it wants to be an allegory or a novel, and the result is two-dimensional characters that are just circles on the chalkboard of a sociology 100’s class saying things that no modern person would say in order to further a discussion that’s a lot simpler than it thinks it is.
— Jul 28, 2026 05:13PM
Jay
is starting
One page in and the idea that a post-white USA would immediately become an anarchist utopia is tasting a bit noble savage trope. I’m hoping this is exaggerated for satire/commentary.
— Jul 04, 2026 07:28PM

