Angel’s Reviews > Death at the Sapphic Ball > Status Update

Is it just the version I downloaded or is this full of weird spellings like lap top (why’s there a space in this word every time) + random commas where no one would breath + no apostrophe-ing words?? Not to mention the flow of everything is weird af. The premise could acc be cause for a great book so far but I’m THROWN. What’s the heck is this book and did anyone proof read it?? Or agin, just my version?