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M.J.
is 12% done
Sigh. The jumping POV isn't confusing so far but did we really need the hotel clerk's thoughts? And do the two main characters need to be beyond gorgeous? I guess it could be a trait of gargoyles. I'm not sure how feel about the main character using her sex appeal to manipulate males.
— May 01, 2017 07:29AM
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M.J.
is 86% done
There has to be an easier way to make someone question their sanity then this. This is just getting ridiculous and rather boring.
— May 01, 2017 01:56PM
M.J.
is 84% done
I don't know if the reader is supposed to be questioning Stefani's sanity, but using Greg's POV let's the reader know she's not insane.
— May 01, 2017 01:52PM
M.J.
is 77% done
Or never occurred to her to ask Matt or Greg about her mother? Or the fact that her mom was probably a gargoyle? If mom was a gargoyle, that choking she witnessed as a child couldn't have killed her.
— May 01, 2017 01:40PM
M.J.
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This whole waking up back in her bed thing seems way to convoluted.
— May 01, 2017 01:32PM
M.J.
is 73% done
Yep, just to die. It seems remarkably easy to rip out someone's heart and behead them.
— May 01, 2017 01:29PM
M.J.
is 72% done
Are people introduced just to die? Their deaths don't mean much if you can't make the reader connect to them.
— May 01, 2017 01:26PM
M.J.
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Are people introduced just to die? Their deaths don't mean much if you can't make the reader connect to them.
— May 01, 2017 01:26PM
M.J.
is 70% done
One of these baddies is talking like 45. ... Have most characters been talking like him... 😧
— May 01, 2017 01:13PM
M.J.
is 70% done
The heroine is coherent after a few shots and blacking out. Maybe gargoyles don't get drunk the same way as lowly humans do.
— May 01, 2017 01:09PM
