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Of course Stonehenge is the circle of power.

There has to be an easier way to make someone question their sanity then this. This is just getting ridiculous and rather boring.

I don't know if the reader is supposed to be questioning Stefani's sanity, but using Greg's POV let's the reader know she's not insane.

Or never occurred to her to ask Matt or Greg about her mother? Or the fact that her mom was probably a gargoyle? If mom was a gargoyle, that choking she witnessed as a child couldn't have killed her.

This whole waking up back in her bed thing seems way to convoluted.

Yep, just to die. It seems remarkably easy to rip out someone's heart and behead them.

Are people introduced just to die? Their deaths don't mean much if you can't make the reader connect to them.

Are people introduced just to die? Their deaths don't mean much if you can't make the reader connect to them.

One of these baddies is talking like 45. ... Have most characters been talking like him... 😧

The heroine is coherent after a few shots and blacking out. Maybe gargoyles don't get drunk the same way as lowly humans do.

And don't they realize that Greg can probably track them every time Matt takes out money or uses a card?

Do we really need this much history about Bloody Mary?

And couldn't Matt have told her about the prophecy before taking her to his father?

Geez

Matt the policeman, talks too much.

Someone in pain would say 'if you let me up, I'll happily tell you everything I know.' Especially a cop. 🙄

Yeah, a black trench coat in the hospital wouldn't stand out. 🙄
This is almost so bad it's good.

This is reminding me of an 80's movie. I think this is another victim of telling not showing. The wording is still awkward. When the villain falls on the cop car his speech is unnecessarily long. Most villains would just 'I will kill you!' And leave it at that. There is no threat in his speech. And Greg as a villain's name?

I'm guessing the ring is in the doll.

I think I got part of it. A lot of sentences could be combined to form one sentence. Maybe two. The flow is off.

I see we have entered an information dump where. The bad guys once had Hitler as it member. :/

At first the writing seemed fine but now it seems bland. I can't quite put my finger on what's wrong.

At first the writing seemed fine but now it seems bland. I can't quite put my finger on what's wrong.

Slipping into the driver's pov was confusing for a moment. And still not needed.

Sigh. The jumping POV isn't confusing so far but did we really need the hotel clerk's thoughts? And do the two main characters need to be beyond gorgeous? I guess it could be a trait of gargoyles. I'm not sure how feel about the main character using her sex appeal to manipulate males.

Sigh. The jumping POV isn't confusing so far but did we really need the hotel clerk's thoughts? And do the two main characters need to be beyond gorgeous? I guess it could be a trait of gargoyles. I'm not sure how feel about the main character using her sex appeal to manipulate males.

Wow this book drags on so bad... But I'm doing what the author said to in his letter push it through till the end (which I do will basically all books sooner or later)

Wow this book is taking me forever.... hoping to finish it tonight or tomorrow :/