rach!’s Reviews > Eternal Life > Status Update

the will they won’t they is kinda annoying. i wanted her/them to succeed but i should have known. and for a second i thought nir was like her but ig not. and maybe it’s the point but this book feels so cyclical idk so many circles didn’t end up being such a big fan

i am sorta realizing that this story doesn’t really go many places, although it is interesting to learn about her past lives. i guess i’m just wondering what these last 20 pages are building up to and if she were to be cured if she would share it with e? kinda crazy how much e loved her time after time again it almost does not make sense

i keep having to read your name and mine together and think about your last words. oh and green eyes. anyways e you’re devoted but reckless and rachel cares about most of societies rules. the back and forth is kinda annoying tho because she folds pretty easily. hannah stealing the dna was crazy. the tweets? idk the story is ok, good potential but misses it for me occasionally + the israeli propaganda of it all

i fear i walk reading israeli propaganda… also too much alluding like i get it but also i’ve seen it done more masterfully. the dialogue isn’t super convincing to me either… there is so much of it. timeline is hard to follow too

i give the prose 3 stars cause it hits sometimes and the premise is interesting cause my many kids i wonder how her curse works and why won’t she sign the will? why can’t she?