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F. P.
F. P. is on page 149 of 248
There's this saying in screenwriting circles: "arrive late and leave early." Too many comic creators and editors need to follow this too. This comic's a good story; it started out as a fast read but then started becoming really repetitive, also w/showing too many stills/shots, partly to make the story look continuous. No one wants to watch a film shot-by-shot--it would take too long! This book's wearing me out now...
Jul 21, 2026 03:39AM
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F. P.
F. P. is on page 107 of 248
Still such good stuff....
Jul 20, 2026 03:37PM
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F. P.
F. P. is on page 65 of 248
I'm enjoying this; my brain's pretty much glued to it at this point.
Jul 20, 2026 02:07PM
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F. P.
F. P. is on page 40 of 248
The art in this really is very cute!
Jul 20, 2026 01:11PM
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F. P.
F. P. is on page 31 of 248
So far this is a light fast read with simply colored and clearly drawn art.
Jul 20, 2026 11:43AM
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F. P.
F. P. is on page 19 of 248
Jul 20, 2026 10:52AM
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message 1: by F. P. (last edited Jul 21, 2026 04:06AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

F. P. Now the reader's seeing shots of the story, and one character has to VERBALLY repeat those shots/panels to another character, and we have to see that second character's reaction! Have them both in the same physical location experiencing the action!! Or just have the first character later on having "off-screen" repeated what had happened to the second character.

And at one point, for example, in the space of less than a page and a half, there are FOUR panels only showing people shooting down a hallway!!!

As an artist of whatever kind, you can't be so in love with what you're doing that you don't want to slice it up with a machete when it's necessary lol!

I am going to give this 3 stars or DNF and skim the rest. Even my own books just aren't that interesting to me that I want to repeat the same damn scene three different ways or times inside a single narrative lolll!

W.r.t. the other thing with the two characters, have one panel where you just show that the information has been repeated or is being repeated to someone else....

My energy's too low; I can't deal....


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