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Ali
is 20% done
I had LOW expectations. I dislike the female narrator. I don't love being in Garrett's head. YET...there's something endearing about both characters that I am curious to see where this goes.
— Jul 22, 2026 11:21AM
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Ali
is 65% done
it should be illegal to use the word "masculinity" more than once in a hetero romance book. pls kill me.
— Jul 24, 2026 04:45AM
Ali
is 61% done
No, what do you mean you’re upset about being someone else to your freaking ex y’all don’t talk y’all aren’t friends anymore. What do you want out of that? I feel like that’s just dumb and childish you moved on, so yeah you’re somebody else especially to this girl who doesn’t know you I’m glad our main character can have some dumb moments.
— Jul 23, 2026 02:20PM