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Soooooo - I love this writer.....but this book needed a few more read through's/editing. The continuity errors keep pulling me out
— May 03, 2017 06:20PM
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- Val's apparently working all the time with no time to sleep...but I'm yet to see him actually at a job or doing much training...and yet he "keeps his weekends free to wonder to the shops????
Val picks Ashton up from a party and he suddenly has changes of clothes available - they go the gym, work out for 2 hours and then have a shower and put the same clothes back on???
I keep dropping out and raising my eyebrows
— May 03, 2017 06:22PM
Val picks Ashton up from a party and he suddenly has changes of clothes available - they go the gym, work out for 2 hours and then have a shower and put the same clothes back on???
I keep dropping out and raising my eyebrows
