_literati_’s Reviews > A Forbidden Alchemy > Status Update

Yeah, we are on the edge of drama
I can't put my finger on it, but something is missing in this book :/

"But when Patrick looked at Nina, saw the loosen bow in her hair, the scratches on her throat, the eyes that saw everything, he felt the feverish urge to do something foolish."

Okay okay, I admit it
Maybe I missed a bit of old school, green flag yearning