Sabrina’s Reviews > The Serpent and the Wings of Night > Status Update

Maybe this is finally pickin' up. Maybe.

The demon had flinched, and exactly where Raihn had hit the other one.

How can you flinch in a specific part of your body, in this case on your side?
Maybe I always imagined flinching as something it is not.

He stood at the opposite side of the ballroom […], his back to me. […]
He wore a deep purple jacket cut tight against his frame, a bronze sash wrapped around his waist.

If his back is to you, the jacket is going to hide whatever is supposed to be at his waist.

Why have all the editors gone extinct?

He used his weapon, his wings, the full force of his strength—even his magic, which he rarely employed in our training sessions. […]
But then again, Vincent had never held back with me.

Either he rarely employed his full force or he never held back… stop contradicting yourself.
Please book, get your shit together. 🙄

Are we still into vampires!? This feels so last century…
But I've been promised "the best sex scene I have ever read".