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The worst part about a character that is (self-) proclaimed as smart is when she can’t put two and two together. You are the only one that can still communicate with your one-of-a-kind dragon in a no-magic land where you went to look for said dragon’s relatives. Hmmm maybe they are there? Also like rebecca what are these phrases that ate supposed to be hints. Make them more subtle or clearer.
— Jul 26, 2026 08:23AM
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is 28% done
No because why is this the most cliche this cliche book has been
— Jul 25, 2026 10:15AM